Rough Cut Feedback

S2-50 Feedback:
We prefer the edited version of your sequence because it is more effective. The beginning soundtrack was good because it sets the scene. The setting is appropriate for your sequence and the build of suspense throughout the sequence is really effective.
We think the shot change to Lydia in the car could be smoother and more continuous and some of the effects didn't seem to link in with the rest of the sequence.

S2-51 feedback:
Narrative is good and original, convincing acting and clever use of hidden people to play the antagonist/thing. Very little negative feedback, a possible improvement is more jump cuts and less use of the effect which splits the screen into two. Not a massive variety of shots but obviously this is a desired effect. The car scene could perhaps be a little longer and more sinister. Would be interesting to see the scene in colour?

S2 52 feedback:
Story line is extremely well thought, developing the 'blare witch project' idea was done well creating tension at certain scenes. use of diegetic and non-diegatic sounds especially with 'MJs THRILLER' soundtrack. The lack of music added well to atmosphere. Little negative feedback - we thought the 'it looks someone died' dialogue was too obvious?

S2-53 feedback:
We think it seems like a horror not a thriller. its too much like The Blair-Witch Project. We like the scenes were the page and video is cut in 2. We thought it looked stupid Fil putting just his leg out. We only watched rough cut 2. We thought the scary story u told was ordinary. Good editing

S2-54 feedback:
it's the best one we've seen :) and it made me jump which is good because it really built tension. we like the way that the camera work is all hand held because it made it seem more realistic. we dont think it needed a sound track because the dialogue is so good. congrats.